It was made in Japan, so its an anime. No ifs, ands, or buts about it
I’ll sign up
Theoretically would burn work against Dracovish? I haven’t been playing the meta game that much but 0.5 phys. ATK should hurt it quite a bit
Make sure by the end of the entire story (plan it out!) you’ve answered near all major questions the reader may ask
Your narration style is very fitting for the story. A little more detail could be used, but don’t use too much that it messes up the narration. The installments are a little short, and there hasn’t been too much plot development. However, I do understand that this is the beginning, so moving the plot right not could be a bit hasty.
IMO S&W are some of the worst graphics. (Other than the wild area, the mushroom town, and slumbering Weald) The environment looks really bad and sloppy
Also “They’ve been some of my best friends, but my one human best friend...” is needlessly wordy and redundant. Instead of “best friend” you could just use “friend” and have the same effect on the reader. Overall though, it is a nice introduction that sets up the setting and plot
Nice introduction, sets up questions for the reader, and introduces some characters. However, I felt one of your weaker phrases was “My worst enemy is Shane, the ghost user.”
It feels different than the rest of the phrasing and overall vibe of the narration. At that point, it also feels like facts are being spat to the reader.
Unova because B&E had my favorite storyline and villains out of any Pokemon game, and thr music was great.
There are a few grammatical mistakes, and while the details are good, they’re just thrown at you. Something like
“(Person A) was a bully. He was mean.”
Isn't very interesting or exciting to read. Try citing an example like
“(Person A) crumpled up my homework. He was the school bully”
Don't do this repeatedly though, as that can also get boring.
Would I risk my life: Depends. If I consciously knew that I could die, then I would chicken out. If I’m unaware of the danger, then I will try to help it.
Treat like family: Probably not. I’m pretty bad with pets, and I would release it to the wild if I could. Adopting a Pokémon would grant me fame, but also cause me to be a freak in societies eyes. The Pokémon would also be taken away by animal control or other facilities for testing and research. If I brought a Pokémon home, my parents would, rightfully so, flip out.
What Pokémon would I want it to be: Something inconspicuous like a Lillipup, Eevee, Klefkey, Pidove, Pidgey, or Raticate. This is so I wouldn’t bring unnecessary attention to myself.
No detail, bland, written like a script instead of a book.
There are too many colors that clash
Not enough changes occur inbetween the evolutions. Most Pokemon go through many changes when evolving, for example the Mudkip line changes a lot but you can still see the original essence of mudkip in Swampert
Cause one looks better to a majority of the fanbanse
Pretty sure you edited the title. Originally was “rate my nickname team”
Pokémon can’t have 252 of all EV’s. There is a max of 508 (Correct me if im wrong) EV’s that you can distribute.
That’s.... not how it works