Raboot

Right now I’m doing some redesigns for the Galar starters and their evolutions (+gigantamax forms) and I’m wondering what should be the secondary type for the final evos. I know I want Cinderace to be fire/electric, but I don’t know what to do with Inteleon and Rillaboom. Any thoughts?

Images taken from Pokemon HOME.

S/V mid is not even out yet so we gotta go without them

Also there's a Corvisquire, and drednaw and orbettle were fresh (though they had to be sacled to beat Kabu,that whole stretch they were injured severely)

Names (Electrike no name yet)

Ruk(Raboot)

Brav (Rufflet)

Bowser (Drednaw)

Robin(Orbeetle)

Hawkie (Corvisquire)

Any suggestions for Electrike would be appreciated

Like for example, Drizzile is the high-schooler who eggs / TP's houses. Thwackey is the high school band member and Raboot is the extra sporty kid.

Firstly, I'm trying to be a better writer so all critcism is appreciated. Also you might have to download the comic images to read them.

Chapter 1: Farwell home, Hello crisis

The shimmering morning sun awoke Zane(a Raboot) up to another day of worthless training. What's the point in constant laborious training if me and my master are the only two living animals in the entire world? My master was so elderly I fear I may soon be the last living thing on this planet. Thoughts like these crowded into Zane's head as he changed from his normal outfit to his training gi and descended down the nicely polished wooden starwell to eat breakfast. I already learned Fire pledge, High jump kick, counter and protect. I also nearly choked to death on an everstone I kicked at a tree, thanks to that my dreams of becoming a Cinderace are crushed forever. So I could see no way left to get stronger, what does today have in store? Zane could feel it would be different, whether it would be a good day or bad he couldn't tell. Zane looked down at his plate, he accidentally shoveled down his breakfast again like he always did when he was in deep thought. His master came in to sit for breakfast with him like he did every morning, but today there was a dusty old cracked leather book with horrible red stitching on it instead of a plate.

"Raboot, you're seven now, I feel you are finally old enough to not dramatically take in what I am about to tell you." Willikre(pronounced will-ick-er) declared.

"Finally! I was starting to think there wasn't a reason for my training." Zane responded and bit his ear to snap him out of the excitement." I'd better have been training for a good reason or I'm not going to take this as well as you hope."

"I am sure you will be proud to learn your purpose, I have no worries now about how you'll handle it." Willikre blew the heavy dust off the old book, dimming the surrounding sunlight coming from the windows." As is there is nothing beyond this world for us."

"N-nothing?" Zane interrupted.

Willikre gave an annoyed glare and continued.

"Nothing. But you can change that. There is a pokemon I would have once been able to take on alone, but it's rage and hatred grew as other humans brought it's dimension to ruin. With it's growing rage, it's strength grew too, so much it accidentally tore a hole in it's own dimension ending up alone in the dark vast void of ultra space. It now roams around breaking the strands that connect the dimensions and destroying worlds. I'm nearly 67 and can not beat it alone now, I need someone strong like you to fight by my side. This is why you train Raboot, because there are people that need you to protect them, keep their soul ablaze and spirits high." Willikre ended.

"... I understand... . ... WAIT!! There are others aside from us!?" Zane asked, suddenly bursting with realization.

"To answer any questions you must first beat the answers out of me, your exam starts today."

"Beat them out of you? B-but you're so old, I don't want to injure you." Zane replied worriedly.

"You will encounter people and pokemon who won't cooperate unless you beat them down to their place first, our TV is a perfect example of this situation. And your goal is answers correct?"

"Yeah, prepare to get beaten to a pulp then!" Zane answered.

They made their way to the dirt arena area of the front yard for the exam.

Zanes vision was blurry, but finally focused on his now cast covered foot, his stomach had some tiny scratches where he got jabbed too. Guess I failed my exam then... and broke my foot with that last high jump kick. Willikre came outside with lunch and crutches.

" I'm proud of your improvement, but it's still not enough. Your defence is remarkable and that counter was exceptionally powerful. You will learn to use counter as a state instead of a move, then you shall be ready."

"You're crazy counter doesn't work like that, I get one counter before reverting back."Zane argued.

"Just like I was crazy before I taught you to use one big fire pledge instead of multiple smaller ones?"

"No, this is different."

"No my boy, it's harder."

"... I guess." Zane sighed, this would mean at least a few more months of being stuck on this stupid dying planet. He kicked a small rock at the thought which flung into Willikre's staff cracking its gem's glass outer layer. They both jolted upright, spilling their food as a thundering noise split the air causing dark clouds to cast ominous shadows upon the earth. blue portals started rapidly shredding the air and ground around it.

"No! The staff!" Willikre rushed inside and a few moments later swung the door open and gripped Zane's paw. He was carrying a bag of flutes Zane had never seen before.

"W-what's going on!?" Zane yelled half confused and half in pain from occasionally stepping with his broken foot while they ran.

"The pokemon Lunala gave me this staff so I could help contain the pokemon that wonders ultra space, when my staff breaks, I lose control over the portals and only Lunala or Solgaleo can fix this." Willikre responded. They arrived at some altar spot with a cracked mossy statue of some moon pokemon, Zane guessed this was Lunala.

Willikre took out a red flute and started playing an ominous tune... ... ... .. an ultra wormhole ripped apart the sky above and lit the earth below. Lunala swiftly descended from the gateway, immediately noticing the damage and started repairing the fabric of space. Not having to worry about the flutes now, Willikre picked up Raboot and ran back towards the house having to dodge wormholes that randomly opened up on the way. He set Zane down next to his crutches and ran over to the staff to pry the crystal out. Willikre put the crystal into a metal shell along with some sand.

"Raboot use fire pledge on the metal case." Willikre ordered. Zane did so summoning a huge scorching column of flaming light that was nearly an unbearable heat to sit next to. Zane almost yelled in surprise as the ground below him gave way to an ultra wormhole.

"M-MASTER!" Zane screamed not wanting to be seperated, he had no idea of what could possibly await him outside of this world.

"Raboot! I've got- NO!" Willikre said as he barely missed Zane's paw. They both stared fearfully into eachothers growingly distant eyes for what could be the last time as Zane and his crutches fell away into a new bizzare land.

To be continued?

Ok, here's my OC Cinderace Mitsuhiro and Raboot Naruto. They are brothers

I don't like this much, but...

Wellp, I like this scetch more lol

Hattrem hunting for strong emotions as bonus

Her name is Hatter

The second evolution of all galar starters are..Ehm.. “Edgy”