Criticising:

• Zoroark's edits look unfit with the rest of the design.

• Those aren't speech bubbles, where's the tail?

• Some pngs just float even if they can't fly! Not to mention the other things that aren't in the right place like the dog on the tree.

• Wtf is with the legendary dogs? Why do they change design twice and after the first time they change to their actual designs?

• The plot is just generally all over the place.

Oh! Also, the lack of periods makes everything without a question or exclamation mark seem like a joke!

Sorry, but you can't learn without credit! <- i typed that!

Sorry, but you can't learn without credit! <- i typed that!

It's called constructive criticism

Yeah, I couldn't find the words for it. Thanks!

Yw