User blog comment:Cloverfield monster/Pokemon Hollywood Live Action movie(2nd Draft)/@comment-1697505-20110421162035/@comment-1697505-20110424134721

I meant dialogue as in story, you haven't really understood what I said. Try making a third draft that includes everyones comments and suggestions. Also if you do make a 3rd draft, I'd appreciate it if you watched http://pokemonepisode.org/pokemon-the-first-movie-mewtwo-strikes-back/ and http://pokemonepisode.org/pokemon-arceus-and-the-jewel-of-life/ for inspiration that's original and not copied.